From joel@automatvapen.se Sat Feb 19 13:34:27 2005 Return-Path: Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3B6A716A4CE for ; Sat, 19 Feb 2005 13:34:27 +0000 (GMT) Received: from av7-2-sn3.vrr.skanova.net (av7-2-sn3.vrr.skanova.net [81.228.9.182]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3A7C543D1D for ; Sat, 19 Feb 2005 13:34:26 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from joel@automatvapen.se) Received: by av7-2-sn3.vrr.skanova.net (Postfix, from userid 502) id DE7B137FD6; Sat, 19 Feb 2005 14:34:24 +0100 (CET) Received: from smtp3-2-sn3.vrr.skanova.net (smtp3-2-sn3.vrr.skanova.net [81.228.9.102]) by av7-2-sn3.vrr.skanova.net (Postfix) with ESMTP id CB69037E61 for ; Sat, 19 Feb 2005 14:34:24 +0100 (CET) Received: from dude.automatvapen.se (t12o955p71.telia.com [213.66.34.191]) by smtp3-2-sn3.vrr.skanova.net (Postfix) with SMTP id 3ECC137E42 for ; Sat, 19 Feb 2005 14:34:22 +0100 (CET) Received: by dude.automatvapen.se (sSMTP sendmail emulation); Sat, 19 Feb 2005 14:34:32 +0100 Message-Id: <20050219133422.3ECC137E42@smtp3-2-sn3.vrr.skanova.net> Date: Sat, 19 Feb 2005 14:34:32 +0100 From: "Joel Dahl" Reply-To: Joel Dahl To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Cc: Subject: [patch] Update Handbook: Remove contractions X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 X-GNATS-Notify: >Number: 77729 >Category: docs >Synopsis: [patch] Update Handbook: Remove contractions >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: closed >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sat Feb 19 13:40:15 GMT 2005 >Closed-Date: Sat Feb 19 14:04:16 GMT 2005 >Last-Modified: Sat Feb 19 14:04:16 GMT 2005 >Originator: Joel Dahl >Release: FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD dude.automatvapen.se 5.3-STABLE FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE #0: Thu Feb 10 12:46:21 CET 2005 joel@dude.automatvapen.se:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386 >Description: Remove a few contractions in the handbook. Patch attached. >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: --- contrac4.diff begins here --- Index: firewalls/chapter.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.36 diff -u -r1.36 chapter.sgml --- firewalls/chapter.sgml 18 Feb 2005 12:08:24 -0000 1.36 +++ firewalls/chapter.sgml 19 Feb 2005 13:14:01 -0000 @@ -258,7 +258,7 @@ PF is part of the base system. Do not use the security/pf port - on these versions of &os;. It won't work. + on these versions of &os;. It will not work. Use the &man.pf.4; support of the base system instead. @@ -2587,7 +2587,7 @@ may be allowed in by the later authorized service rules. Second reason is that by having a rule that explicitly blocks selected packets that I receive on an infrequent - bases and don't want to see in the log, this keeps them from + bases and do not want to see in the log, this keeps them from being caught by the last rule in the section which blocks and logs all packets which have fallen through the rules. The last rule in the section which blocks and logs all Index: ports/chapter.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.238 diff -u -r1.238 chapter.sgml --- ports/chapter.sgml 13 Feb 2005 10:24:10 -0000 1.238 +++ ports/chapter.sgml 19 Feb 2005 13:13:04 -0000 @@ -331,7 +331,7 @@ string is some text to search for. This searches port names, comments, descriptions and dependencies and can be used to find ports which relate to a - particular subject if you don't know the name of the program + particular subject if you do not know the name of the program you are looking for. In both of these cases, the search string is case-insensitive. Index: security/chapter.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.262 diff -u -r1.262 chapter.sgml --- security/chapter.sgml 13 Feb 2005 10:24:10 -0000 1.262 +++ security/chapter.sgml 19 Feb 2005 13:22:57 -0000 @@ -2425,7 +2425,7 @@ Now it is time to start up the KDC services. Run /etc/rc.d/kerberos start and /etc/rc.d/kadmind start to bring up the - services. Note that you won't have any kerberized daemons running + services. Note that you will not have any kerberized daemons running at this point but you should be able to confirm the that the KDC is functioning by obtaining and listing a ticket for the principal (user) that you just created from the @@ -2697,7 +2697,7 @@ and reverse) in DNS (or /etc/hosts as a minimum). CNAMEs will work, but the A and PTR records must be correct and in - place. The error message isn't very intuitive: + place. The error message is not very intuitive: Kerberos5 refuses authentication because Read req failed: Key table entry not found. @@ -3371,7 +3371,7 @@ The internal addresses of the two networks can be - public or private IP addresses, it doesn't matter. You can + public or private IP addresses, it does not matter. You can be running NAT on the gateway machine if necessary. @@ -3733,7 +3733,7 @@ There must be a mechanism for specifying which traffic - should be encrypted. Obviously, you don't want to encrypt + should be encrypted. Obviously, you do not want to encrypt all your outgoing traffic -- you only want to encrypt the traffic that is part of the VPN. The rules that you put in place to determine what traffic will be encrypted are called @@ -3811,7 +3811,7 @@ this to encrypt the traffic over the VPN. They periodically change this secret, so that even if an attacker were to crack one of the keys (which is as theoretically close to unfeasible as it - gets) it won't do them much good -- by the time they've cracked + gets) it will not do them much good -- by the time they have cracked the key the two daemons have chosen another one. racoon's configuration is stored in --- contrac4.diff ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: simon State-Changed-When: Sat Feb 19 14:04:10 GMT 2005 State-Changed-Why: Committed, thanks! http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=77729 >Unformatted: