From joel@automatvapen.se Sun Dec 12 11:05:46 2004 Return-Path: Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0EDDB16A4CE for ; Sun, 12 Dec 2004 11:05:46 +0000 (GMT) Received: from av10-1-sn2.hy.skanova.net (av10-1-sn2.hy.skanova.net [81.228.8.181]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id BC22F43D53 for ; Sun, 12 Dec 2004 11:05:45 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from joel@automatvapen.se) Received: by av10-1-sn2.hy.skanova.net (Postfix, from userid 502) id 9576637F61; Sun, 12 Dec 2004 12:05:44 +0100 (CET) Received: from smtp4-2-sn2.hy.skanova.net (smtp4-2-sn2.hy.skanova.net [81.228.8.93]) by av10-1-sn2.hy.skanova.net (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8928037E8F for ; Sun, 12 Dec 2004 12:05:44 +0100 (CET) Received: from dude.automatvapen.se (t7o55p23.telia.com [81.225.220.23]) by smtp4-2-sn2.hy.skanova.net (Postfix) with SMTP id C160F37E5A for ; Sun, 12 Dec 2004 12:05:34 +0100 (CET) Received: by dude.automatvapen.se (sSMTP sendmail emulation); Sun, 12 Dec 2004 12:05:41 +0100 Message-Id: <20041212110534.C160F37E5A@smtp4-2-sn2.hy.skanova.net> Date: Sun, 12 Dec 2004 12:05:41 +0100 From: "Joel Dahl" Reply-To: Joel Dahl To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Cc: Subject: [patch] update handbook: Add chapter 24 to preface X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 X-GNATS-Notify: >Number: 74978 >Category: docs >Synopsis: [patch] update handbook: Add chapter 24 to preface >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: keramida >State: closed >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sun Dec 12 11:10:26 GMT 2004 >Closed-Date: Mon Dec 13 11:48:11 GMT 2004 >Last-Modified: Mon Dec 13 11:48:11 GMT 2004 >Originator: Joel Dahl >Release: FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD dude.automatvapen.se 5.3-STABLE FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE #1: Sat Nov 13 19:50:36 CET 2004 joel@dude.automatvapen.se:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/WRK i386 >Description: The preface in the handbook does not contain any information about chapter 24 (the "firewalls" chapter), so let's add some! >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: --- fipref.diff begins here --- Index: preface.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.25 diff -u -r1.25 preface.sgml --- preface.sgml 25 Aug 2004 19:54:41 -0000 1.25 +++ preface.sgml 12 Dec 2004 10:24:14 -0000 @@ -428,6 +428,15 @@ + , Firewalls + + Explains the philosophy behind software based firewalls and + provides detailed information about the configuration of the + different firewall software applications available for + FreeBSD. + + + , Advanced Networking Describes many networking topics, including sharing an --- fipref.diff ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->keramida Responsible-Changed-By: keramida Responsible-Changed-When: Mon Dec 13 09:51:11 GMT 2004 Responsible-Changed-Why: I'll work with Joel on this. http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=74978 From: Giorgos Keramidas To: Joel Dahl Cc: bug-followup@freebsd.org Subject: Re: docs/74978: [patch] update handbook: Add chapter 24 to preface Date: Mon, 13 Dec 2004 11:51:56 +0200 On 2004-12-12 12:05, Joel Dahl wrote: > --- fipref.diff begins here --- > Index: preface.sgml > =================================================================== > RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.sgml,v > retrieving revision 1.25 > diff -u -r1.25 preface.sgml > --- preface.sgml 25 Aug 2004 19:54:41 -0000 1.25 > +++ preface.sgml 12 Dec 2004 10:24:14 -0000 > @@ -428,6 +428,15 @@ > > > > + , Firewalls > + > + Explains the philosophy behind software based firewalls and > + provides detailed information about the configuration of the > + different firewall software applications available for > + FreeBSD. > + > + > + > , Advanced Networking > > Describes many networking topics, including sharing an > --- fipref.diff ends here --- The phrase "firewall software applications" strikes me as a bit odd, since the firewalls are not "applications" in the usual sense of the word (i.e. something you run as a normal user or something). Does the following look ok to you, Joel? % Index: preface.sgml % =================================================================== % RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.sgml,v % retrieving revision 1.25 % diff -u -u -r1.25 preface.sgml % --- preface.sgml 25 Aug 2004 19:54:41 -0000 1.25 % +++ preface.sgml 13 Dec 2004 09:48:59 -0000 % @@ -428,6 +428,14 @@ % % % % + , Firewalls % + % + Explains the philosophy behind software-based firewalls and % + provides detailed information about the configuration of the % + different firewalls available for FreeBSD. % + % + % + % , Advanced Networking % % Describes many networking topics, including sharing an From: Joel Dahl To: Giorgos Keramidas Cc: bug-followup@freebsd.org Subject: Re: docs/74978: [patch] update handbook: Add chapter 24 to preface Date: Mon, 13 Dec 2004 12:28:19 +0100 On Mon, 2004-12-13 at 11:51 +0200, Giorgos Keramidas wrote: > The phrase "firewall software applications" strikes me as a bit odd, > since the firewalls are not "applications" in the usual sense of the > word (i.e. something you run as a normal user or something). Does the > following look ok to you, Joel? > > % Index: preface.sgml > % =================================================================== > % RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.sgml,v > % retrieving revision 1.25 > % diff -u -u -r1.25 preface.sgml > % --- preface.sgml 25 Aug 2004 19:54:41 -0000 1.25 > % +++ preface.sgml 13 Dec 2004 09:48:59 -0000 > % @@ -428,6 +428,14 @@ > % > % > % > % + , Firewalls > % + > % + Explains the philosophy behind software-based firewalls and > % + provides detailed information about the configuration of the > % + different firewalls available for FreeBSD. > % + > % + > % + > % , Advanced Networking > % > % Describes many networking topics, including sharing an Looks good to me, thanks. The topic from chapter 24.3 inspired me use "firewall software applications", maybe someone should reword that part to something better... From: Joel Dahl To: Giorgos Keramidas Cc: bug-followup@freebsd.org Subject: Re: docs/74978: [patch] update handbook: Add chapter 24 to preface Date: Mon, 13 Dec 2004 12:35:34 +0100 On Mon, 2004-12-13 at 12:28 +0100, Joel Dahl wrote: > Looks good to me, thanks. The topic from chapter 24.3 inspired me use ^ to State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: keramida State-Changed-When: Mon Dec 13 11:47:47 GMT 2004 State-Changed-Why: Committed, thanks :) http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=74978 >Unformatted: