From pepper@guest.reppep.com Sat May 18 22:12:04 2002 Return-Path: Received: from guest.reppep.com (guest.reppep.com [64.81.19.110]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id AA59937B40E for ; Sat, 18 May 2002 22:11:59 -0700 (PDT) Received: (from pepper@localhost) by guest.reppep.com (8.11.6/8.11.6) id g4J5C2411413; Sun, 19 May 2002 01:12:02 -0400 (EDT) (envelope-from pepper) Message-Id: <200205190512.g4J5C2411413@guest.reppep.com> Date: Sun, 19 May 2002 01:12:02 -0400 (EDT) From: Chris Pepper Reply-To: Chris Pepper To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Cc: Subject: HTML & text cleanup X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 X-GNATS-Notify: >Number: 38276 >Category: docs >Synopsis: HTML & text cleanup >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: keramida >State: closed >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sat May 18 22:20:01 PDT 2002 >Closed-Date: Thu May 23 19:40:22 PDT 2002 >Last-Modified: Thu May 23 19:40:22 PDT 2002 >Originator: Chris Pepper >Release: FreeBSD 4.5-RELEASE i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD guest.reppep.com 4.5-RELEASE FreeBSD 4.5-RELEASE #0: Mon Jan 28 14:31:56 GMT 2002 murray@builder.freebsdmall.com:/usr/src/sys/compile/GENERIC i386 >Description: Add hostid tag to domain name. Clarify that *sendmail* must be restarted (current wording is ambiguous). A few more minor clean-ups. >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: SGML diff attached. --- chapter.sgml.diff begins here --- Index: chapter.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.49 diff -u -r1.49 chapter.sgml --- chapter.sgml 2002/05/12 23:34:30 1.49 +++ chapter.sgml 2002/05/19 05:02:13 @@ -397,7 +397,7 @@ the local host name. Place any domains or hosts that sendmail is to be receiving mail for. For example, if this mail server was to accept mail for the - domain example.com and the host + domain example.com and the host mail.example.com, its local-host-names might look something like this: @@ -406,7 +406,7 @@ mail.example.com When this file is updated, &man.sendmail.8; needs to be - restarted for it to read the changes. + restarted to read the changes. @@ -416,14 +416,14 @@ sendmail's master configuration file, sendmail.cf controls the overall behavior of sendmail, including everything - from rewriting e-mail addresses to printing reject messages for + from rewriting e-mail addresses to printing rejection messages to remote mail servers. Naturally, with such a diverse role, this configuration file is quite complex and its details are a bit out of the scope of this section. Fortunately, this file rarely needs to be changed for standard mail servers. The master sendmail configuration - file can be built from &man.m4.1; macros that define features + file can be built from &man.m4.1; macros that define the features and behavior of sendmail. Please see /usr/src/contrib/sendmail/cf/README for some of the details. @@ -436,11 +436,11 @@ <filename>/etc/mail/virtusertable</filename> - The virtualusertable maps mail for + The virtualusertable maps mail addresses for virtual domains and mailboxes to real mailboxes. These mailboxes can be local, - remote, an alias defined in - /etc/mail/aliases or a file. + remote, aliases defined in + /etc/mail/aliases or files. Example Virtual Domain Mail Map --- chapter.sgml.diff ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: From: Giorgos Keramidas To: Chris Pepper Cc: bug-followup@FreeBSD.ORG Subject: Re: docs/38276: HTML & text cleanup Date: Tue, 21 May 2002 18:26:10 +0300 On 2002-05-19 01:12, Chris Pepper wrote: > Index: chapter.sgml > =================================================================== > RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml,v > retrieving revision 1.49 > diff -u -r1.49 chapter.sgml > --- chapter.sgml 2002/05/12 23:34:30 1.49 > +++ chapter.sgml 2002/05/19 05:02:13 > @@ -397,7 +397,7 @@ > the local host name. Place any domains or hosts that > sendmail is to be receiving mail for. > For example, if this mail server was to accept mail for the > - domain example.com and the host > + domain example.com and the host Nice :) > When this file is updated, &man.sendmail.8; needs to be > - restarted for it to read the changes. > + restarted to read the changes. OK. > - from rewriting e-mail addresses to printing reject messages for > + from rewriting e-mail addresses to printing rejection messages to OK too. > The master sendmail configuration > - file can be built from &man.m4.1; macros that define features > + file can be built from &man.m4.1; macros that define the features > and behavior of sendmail. Please see Good. > /usr/src/contrib/sendmail/cf/README for > some of the details. > @@ -436,11 +436,11 @@ > > <filename>/etc/mail/virtusertable</filename> > > - The virtualusertable maps mail for > + The virtualusertable maps mail addresses for > virtual domains and Can we make this `virtusertable' in the text of the paragraph too, as in the title? > mailboxes to real mailboxes. These mailboxes can be local, > - remote, an alias defined in > - /etc/mail/aliases or a file. > + remote, aliases defined in > + /etc/mail/aliases or files. Cool. Except for the virtusertable, I think this can go in pretty much unchanged :) -- Giorgos Keramidas - http://www.FreeBSD.org keramida@FreeBSD.org - The Power to Serve State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: keramida State-Changed-When: Thu May 23 19:39:42 PDT 2002 State-Changed-Why: These changes have been already committed as part of PR docs/38318. Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->keramida Responsible-Changed-By: keramida Responsible-Changed-When: Thu May 23 19:39:42 PDT 2002 Responsible-Changed-Why: http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=38276 >Unformatted: