From nobody@FreeBSD.org Wed Aug 8 09:33:05 2001 Return-Path: Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [216.136.204.21]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 936AF37B40D for ; Wed, 8 Aug 2001 09:33:04 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from nobody@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from nobody@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.11.4/8.11.4) id f78GX4X13865; Wed, 8 Aug 2001 09:33:04 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from nobody) Message-Id: <200108081633.f78GX4X13865@freefall.freebsd.org> Date: Wed, 8 Aug 2001 09:33:04 -0700 (PDT) From: Shill To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: FreeBSD FAQ typos X-Send-Pr-Version: www-1.0 >Number: 29547 >Category: docs >Synopsis: FreeBSD FAQ typos >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: closed >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Wed Aug 08 09:40:00 PDT 2001 >Closed-Date: Thu Aug 9 00:30:39 PDT 2001 >Last-Modified: Thu Aug 09 00:31:48 PDT 2001 >Originator: Shill >Release: >Organization: >Environment: >Description: FAQ dated Wed Jul 11 04:01:00 2001 Chapter 2 - Question 11 - Paragraph 2: "we suggest you by a new hard drive." -> "we suggest you _buy_ a new hard drive." Chapter 2 - Question 16 - Paragraph 1: "what manufacturers claim is the “quote” physical geometry" -> Shouldn't there be an “unquote” after "physical geometry"? Or shouldn't "physical geometry" really be between quotation marks? Chapter 2 - Question 25 - Paragraph 1: "The boot blocks think the system is installed on wd1" -> Wasn't wd replaced with ad in 4.0? Shouldn't there be a mention that the problem was solved for 4.0 and higher? Chapter 2 - Question 26 - Paragraph 1: "use 9 chip memory modules vice 18 chip memory modules." -> "vice" ? Were you aiming for "versus" perhaps? Chapter 2 - Question 28 - Paragraph 1: "The maxiumum file size" -> "The _maximum_ file size" Chapter 3 - Question 7 - Paragraph 1: "so the should all look like SCSI disks to FreeBSD" -> "so _they_ (?) should all look like SCSI disks to FreeBSD" Chapter 3 - Question 9 - Paragraph 3: "tell the console driver to use the existence of the USB keyboard." -> "tell the console driver _about_ (?) the existence of the USB keyboard." Chapter 4 - Question 10 - Paragraph 3: "If you next run “make buildworld” again" -> "If you _then_ run “make buildworld” again" Chapter 4 - Question 19 - Paragraph 3: "This situation does not arise in FreeBSD 4.x as has a lot of work has been done to make the it more PnP-centric" -> "This situation does not arise in FreeBSD 4.x as _ a lot of work has been done to make _ it more PnP-centric" remove "has" and "the" Chapter 5 - Question 4 - Paragraph 1: "Xi Graphics and Metro Link sells Accelerated-X product" -> "Xi Graphics and Metro Link _sell_ Accelerated-X product" Chapter 6 - Question 3: The answer doesn't seem relevant to the question but I might be wrong. Chapter 6 - Question 11: "If you want to run some aout applications" -> "If you want to run some _a.out_ applications" "and some aout libs." -> "and some _a.out_ libs." Chapter 8 - Question 21: options SYSVSHM options SYSVSHM # enable shared memory -> Should "options SYSVSHM" appear twice? Chapter 8 - Question 33: "Go into single user mode and than back to multi user mode." -> "Go into single user mode and _then_ back to multi user mode." Chapter 8 - Question 39: "or change the security in /etc/rc.conf then reboot." -> "or change the security _level_ in /etc/rc.conf then reboot." Chapter 10 - Question 23: OK, this one isn't a typo. Isn't dummynet(4) also a bandwidth manager? Chapter 11 - Question 23 - Paragraph 2: "If, as a result of ppps dynamic IP assignment" -> "If, as a result of _ppp's_ dynamic IP assignment" Chapter 13 - Question 1 - Paragraph 2: "when the system is truely idle." -> "when the system is _truly_ idle." Chapter 13 - Question 4 - Paragraph 1: "As people ported unix from this simple system" -> "As people ported _Unix_ from this simple system" "for the early ports of unix" -> "for the early ports of _Unix_" >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: dd State-Changed-When: Thu Aug 9 00:30:39 PDT 2001 State-Changed-Why: I've fixed most of these, thanks! I think the only one I didn't fix was the "ad1" vs "wd1" one; that's a general problem, and requires rewriting the entire question. If you'd like, you can file another PR about that, preferably with a patch :-). Thanks again. http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=29547 >Unformatted: