From jcamou@opensea.malexa.org.mx Sun Jan 30 03:33:11 2005 Return-Path: Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1C68D16A4CE for ; Sun, 30 Jan 2005 03:33:11 +0000 (GMT) Received: from fed1rmmtao10.cox.net (fed1rmmtao10.cox.net [68.230.241.29]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id BB32F43D49 for ; Sun, 30 Jan 2005 03:33:10 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from jcamou@opensea.malexa.org.mx) Received: from opensea.malexa.org.mx ([68.0.141.123]) by fed1rmmtao10.cox.net (InterMail vM.6.01.04.00 201-2131-117-20041022) with ESMTP id <20050130033308.MBRG28177.fed1rmmtao10.cox.net@opensea.malexa.org.mx> for ; Sat, 29 Jan 2005 22:33:08 -0500 Received: from opensea.malexa.org.mx (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by opensea.malexa.org.mx (8.13.1/8.13.1) with ESMTP id j0U3aBxg090689 for ; Sat, 29 Jan 2005 20:36:12 -0700 (MST) (envelope-from jcamou@opensea.malexa.org.mx) Received: (from jcamou@localhost) by opensea.malexa.org.mx (8.13.1/8.12.11/Submit) id j0U3aBAK090688; Sat, 29 Jan 2005 20:36:11 -0700 (MST) (envelope-from jcamou) Message-Id: <200501300336.j0U3aBAK090688@opensea.malexa.org.mx> Date: Sat, 29 Jan 2005 20:36:11 -0700 (MST) From: "Jesus R. Camou" Reply-To: "Jesus R. Camou" To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Cc: Subject: [PATCH] Fixes on www/en/docs.sgml X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 X-GNATS-Notify: >Number: 76841 >Category: www >Synopsis: [PATCH] Fixes on www/en/docs.sgml >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: medium >Responsible: freebsd-www >State: closed >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: change-request >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sun Jan 30 03:40:10 GMT 2005 >Closed-Date: Mon Jan 31 13:48:42 CET 2005 >Last-Modified: Mon Jan 31 13:48:42 CET 2005 >Originator: Jesus R. Camou >Release: FreeBSD 4.10-STABLE i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD opensea.malexa.org.mx 4.10-STABLE FreeBSD 4.10-STABLE #2: Mon Nov 22 16:49:52 MST 2004 jcamou@opensea.malexa.org.mx:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/OPENSEA i386 >Description: o Add a missing
and the name of the article in the repository to match the other articles on the list: (relaydelay)
o s/productization/production >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: --- docs.sgml.diff begins here --- Index: docs.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/www/en/docs.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.187 diff -u -r1.187 docs.sgml --- docs.sgml 31 Dec 2004 14:57:31 -0000 1.187 +++ docs.sgml 30 Jan 2005 03:22:13 -0000 @@ -254,7 +254,7 @@ configure a FreeBSD client to boot from a PXE server.

FreeBSD as - a greylist mail server + a greylist mail server (relaydelay)
Implementing a greylist mail server on FreeBSD using Sendmail, MySQL, Perl and the relaydelay software. This is an excellent method to use in the @@ -266,7 +266,7 @@ engineering team to make production quality releases of the FreeBSD Operating System. It describes the tools available for those interested in producing customized FreeBSD releases - for corporate rollouts or commercial productization.

+ for corporate rollouts or commercial production.

FreeBSD Release Engineering for Third Party Packages --- docs.sgml.diff ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: From: Christian Brueffer To: "Jesus R. Camou" Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Subject: Re: www/76841: [PATCH] Fixes on www/en/docs.sgml Date: Sun, 30 Jan 2005 17:03:00 +0100 --KDt/GgjP6HVcx58l Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable >=20 > --- docs.sgml.diff begins here --- > Index: docs.sgml > =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D > RCS file: /home/ncvs/www/en/docs.sgml,v > retrieving revision 1.187 > diff -u -r1.187 docs.sgml > --- docs.sgml 31 Dec 2004 14:57:31 -0000 1.187 > +++ docs.sgml 30 Jan 2005 03:22:13 -0000 > @@ -254,7 +254,7 @@ > configure a FreeBSD client to boot from a PXE server.

> =20 >

FreeBSD as > - a greylist mail server > + a greylist mail server (relaydelay)
> Implementing a greylist mail server on FreeBSD > using Sendmail, MySQL, Perl and the relaydelay > software. This is an excellent method to use in the > @@ -266,7 +266,7 @@ > engineering team to make production quality releases of the > FreeBSD Operating System. It describes the tools available > for those interested in producing customized FreeBSD releases > - for corporate rollouts or commercial productization.

> + for corporate rollouts or commercial production.

> =20 Hmm, I'm not sure about the second change. I haven't found the word productization in the Merriam Webster online dictionary or in dict.leo.org, but a quick google search seems to indicate that this is a common word. Judging from the description at http://www.maxrumpus.com/services_software.= html, the word makes sense here. Does anyone else have an opinion on this? - Christian --=20 Christian Brueffer chris@unixpages.org brueffer@FreeBSD.org GPG Key: http://people.freebsd.org/~brueffer/brueffer.key.asc GPG Fingerprint: A5C8 2099 19FF AACA F41B B29B 6C76 178C A0ED 982D --KDt/GgjP6HVcx58l Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.0 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQFB/QU0bHYXjKDtmC0RAg1QAKCDePpulJq56plhAuE12fSSj8OBZwCfVLMD VFIviRi3Pd8apDnEltcmCTo= =Cc3C -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --KDt/GgjP6HVcx58l-- State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: brueffer State-Changed-When: Mon Jan 31 13:48:17 CET 2005 State-Changed-Why: First part of the patch committed, thanks! http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=76841 >Unformatted: