From josef@daemon.li Tue Oct 14 13:45:40 2003 Return-Path: Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 72F1A16A4B3 for ; Tue, 14 Oct 2003 13:45:40 -0700 (PDT) Received: from tatiana.utanet.at (tatiana.utanet.at [213.90.36.46]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0E64A43FCB for ; Tue, 14 Oct 2003 13:45:38 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from josef@daemon.li) Received: from plenty.utanet.at ([213.90.36.9]) by tatiana.utanet.at with esmtp (Exim 4.12) id 1A9W2y-0006rw-00 for FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org; Tue, 14 Oct 2003 22:45:36 +0200 Received: from dsl-237-186.utaonline.at ([212.152.237.186] helo=jenny.daemon.li) by plenty.utanet.at with esmtp (Exim 4.12) id 1A9W2r-0005tf-00 for FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org; Tue, 14 Oct 2003 22:45:29 +0200 Received: by jenny.daemon.li (Postfix, from userid 1005) id DB62D57D; Tue, 14 Oct 2003 22:46:50 +0200 (CEST) Message-Id: <20031014204650.DB62D57D@jenny.daemon.li> Date: Tue, 14 Oct 2003 22:46:50 +0200 (CEST) From: Josef El-Rayes Reply-To: Josef El-Rayes To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Cc: Subject: [patch] news/press: correct capitalization of headlines X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 X-GNATS-Notify: >Number: 58029 >Category: www >Synopsis: [patch] news/press: correct capitalization of headlines >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-www >State: closed >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: update >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Tue Oct 14 13:50:19 PDT 2003 >Closed-Date: Thu Jan 15 14:41:18 PST 2004 >Last-Modified: Thu Jan 15 14:41:18 PST 2004 >Originator: Josef El-Rayes >Release: FreeBSD 4.9-RC i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD jenny.daemon.li 4.9-RC FreeBSD 4.9-RC #4: Thu Oct 9 22:17:13 CEST 2003 shammer@jenny.daemon.li:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/JENNY i386 >Description: www/en/news/press.xml: according to the "Chicago Manual of Style" (thanks ceri) i noticed the following rules for headlines: the first and last words and all nouns, pronouns, adjectives, verbs, adverbs, and subordinating conjunctions (if, because, as, that, etc.) are capitalized. Articles (a, an, the), coordinating conjunctions (and, but, or for, nor), and prepositions, regardless of length, are lowercased unless they are the first or last word of the title or subtitle. The to in infinitives is also lowercased. i corrected all the headlines that did not apply to the above rules. i checked them 3x, i should not have missed one, but as i am not 100% certain of the english grammar i may have missed one or two words. i also exchanged "open-source" with "open source" as o'reilly defines it, on its word list. >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: --- press.xml.diff begins here --- --- press.xml.orig Tue Oct 14 11:39:56 2003 +++ press.xml Tue Oct 14 21:54:17 2003 @@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ - Working With ACLs in FreeBSD 5.x + Working With ACLs in FreeBSD 5.X http://ezine.daemonnews.org/200310/acl.html DaemonNews http://www.daemonnews.org/ @@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ - Build your own FreeBSD Segway clone + Build Your Own FreeBSD Segway Clone http://www.theinquirer.net/default.aspx?article=11891 The Inquirer http://www.theinquirer.net @@ -173,7 +173,7 @@ - Why Users Choose BSD Over Linux Or Commercial Software + Why Users Choose BSD over Linux or Commercial Software http://www.internetweek.com/story/showArticle.jhtml?articleID=12800936 Internet Week http://www.internetweek.com/ @@ -185,7 +185,7 @@ - Nearly 2 Million Active Sites running FreeBSD + Nearly 2 Million Active Sites Running FreeBSD http://news.netcraft.com/archives/2003/07/12/nearly_2_million_active_sites_running_freebsd.html Netcraft http://www.netcraft.com/ @@ -196,7 +196,7 @@ - Top providers running FreeBSD: Netcraft + Top Providers Running FreeBSD: Netcraft http://www.theage.com.au/articles/2003/07/10/1057783256883.html The Age http://www.theage.com.au/ @@ -233,7 +233,7 @@ - Is it time for BSD? + Is It Time for BSD? http://www.eweek.com/article2/0,3959,1135078,00.asp EWeek http://www.eweek.com/ @@ -255,7 +255,7 @@ - New distribution point for FreeBSD + New Distribution Point for FreeBSD http://www.theage.com.au/articles/2003/06/19/1055828413910.html The Age http://www.theage.com.au/ @@ -280,7 +280,7 @@ May - FreeBSD support for AMD64 on the way + FreeBSD Support for AMD64 on the Way http://www.theinquirer.net/?article=9383 The Inquirer @@ -330,7 +330,7 @@ March - FreeBSD featured on TechTV + FreeBSD Featured on TechTV http://www.offmyserver.com/cgi-bin/oms/news/techtv_031403.html offmyserver.com @@ -351,7 +351,7 @@ February - FreeBSD 5.0 looks to the enterprise + FreeBSD 5.0 Looks to the Enterprise http://linuxworld.com.au/news.php3?nid=2187&tid=1 linuxworld.com.au http://linuxworld.com.au/ @@ -516,7 +516,7 @@ April - Jordan Hubbard resigns from FreeBSD core + Jordan Hubbard Resigns from FreeBSD Core http://daily.daemonnews.org/view_story.php3?story_id=2837 Daemon News http://www.daemonnews.org/ @@ -573,7 +573,7 @@ - Configuring a FreeBSD Access Point for your Wireless Network + Configuring a FreeBSD Access Point for Your Wireless Network http://www.samag.com/documents/s=7121/sam0205a/sam0205a.htm Sys Admin Magazine http://www.samag.com/ @@ -584,7 +584,7 @@ - Anti-Unix campaign falters + Anti-Unix Campaign Falters http://www.infoworld.com/articles/hn/xml/02/04/01/020401hnunixcamp.xml InfoWorld http://www.infoworld.com/ @@ -599,7 +599,7 @@ March - A Multimedia Tutorial For FreeBSD + A Multimedia Tutorial for FreeBSD http://www.examnotes.net/forums/default.php?ind=122 ExamNotes.net http://www.examnotes.net/ @@ -632,7 +632,7 @@ - Want a Windows alternative? Try BSD + Want a Windows Alternative? Try BSD http://zdnet.com.com/2100-1107-863169.html ZDNet http://www.zdnet.com/ @@ -758,7 +758,7 @@ - A basic guide to securing FreeBSD 4.x-STABLE + A Basic Guide to Securing FreeBSD 4.X-STABLE http://draenor.org/securebsd/secure.txt draenor.org http://draenor.org/ @@ -770,7 +770,7 @@ - FreeBSD to change hands + FreeBSD to Change Hands http://dailynews.yahoo.com/h/cn/20020114/tc/freebsd_to_change_hands_1.html Yahoo News http://dailynews.yahoo.com/ @@ -801,7 +801,7 @@ December - Microsoft Hotmail still runs on U**x + Microsoft Hotmail Still Runs on U**x http://www.theregister.co.uk/content/28/23348.html The Register http://www.theregister.co.uk/ @@ -814,7 +814,7 @@ - Keeping Your Options Open: FreeBSD as a Workstation for UNIX Newbies + Keeping Your Options Open: FreeBSD As a Workstation for UNIX Newbies http://www.osnews.com/printer.php?news_id=392 OS News @@ -890,7 +890,7 @@ September - Running Windows applications on FreeBSD + Running Windows Applications on FreeBSD http://www.onlamp.com/pub/a/bsd/2001/09/21/FreeBSD_Basics.html OnLamp http://www.onlamp.com/ @@ -1069,7 +1069,7 @@ - BSD guru to guide Apple on Unix + BSD Guru to Guide Apple on Unix http://www.macworld.co.uk/news/main_news.cfm?NewsID=3092 @@ -1101,7 +1101,7 @@ - In your face! MS open source attacks backfire + In Your Face! MS Open Source Attacks Backfire http://zdnet.com.com/2100-11-530056.html ZDNet http://www.zdnet.com/ @@ -1370,8 +1370,8 @@ September - INTERNET'S BUSIEST OPENSOURCE SOFTWARE ARCHIVE SETS NEW DOWNLOAD - RECORD + Internet's Busiest Opensource Software Archive Sets New + Download Record http://www.terasolutions.com/pr092900.html TeraSolutions @@ -1398,7 +1398,7 @@ - TRUSTING BSD - Ultra-High Security for FreeBSD + Trusting BSD - Ultra-High Security for FreeBSD http://www.ispworld.com/bw/sep/Unix_Flavor.htm ISPworld @@ -1519,7 +1519,7 @@ - BSD Unix: Power to the people, from the code + BSD Unix: Power to the People, from the Code http://www.salon.com/tech/fsp/2000/05/16/chapter_2_part_one/index.html Salon @@ -1533,7 +1533,7 @@ - Install FreeBSD 4.0 in seven easy steps + Install FreeBSD 4.0 in Seven Easy Steps http://www.techrepublic.com/article.jhtml?id=r00220000516eje01.htm TechRepublic @@ -1557,8 +1557,8 @@ - Developers using open-source software behind bosses' - backs + Developers Using Open Source Software Behind Bosses' + Backs http://www.cnn.com/2000/TECH/computing/05/05/open.source.smugglers.idg/index.html CNN @@ -1618,7 +1618,7 @@ - Commentary: BSD sleight of hand + Commentary: BSD Sleight of Hand http://www.zdnet.com/zdnn/stories/news/0,4586,2507538,00.html ZD Net News @@ -1646,7 +1646,7 @@ March - The legend of BSD + The Legend of BSD http://www.sfbg.com/SFLife/34/26/tech.html sf life @@ -1659,7 +1659,7 @@ - Bostic on the BSD tradition + Bostic on the BSD Tradition http://www.oreillynet.com/pub/a/bsd/2000/03/24/bostic.html O'Reilly Network @@ -1740,7 +1740,7 @@ - Three Unixlike systems may be better than Linux + Three Unix-like Systems may Be Better than Linux http://www.computerworld.com/cwi/story/0,1199,NAV47_STO41147,00.html ComputerWorld @@ -1778,7 +1778,7 @@ - FreeBSD 4.0 And Beyond + FreeBSD 4.0 and Beyond http://www.boardwatch.com/mag/2000/feb/bwm79.html Boardwatch @@ -1795,7 +1795,7 @@ January - Buddying up to BSD: Part Four - FreeBSD + Buddying Up to BSD: Part Four - FreeBSD http://www.linux.com/featured_articles/20000126/270/ Linux.com @@ -1833,7 +1833,7 @@ - Jobs announces new MacOS, becomes 'iCEO' + Jobs Announces New MacOS, Becomes 'iCEO' http://cnn.com/2000/TECH/computing/01/05/macworld.keynote/index.html CNN @@ -1899,7 +1899,7 @@ - FreeBSD 3.3. Robust OS well suited for Internet/Intranet + FreeBSD 3.3. Robust OS Well Suited for Internet/Intranet Deployment http://www.data.com/features/1206a.html @@ -1932,7 +1932,7 @@ - Who controls free software? + Who Controls Free Software? http://www.salon.com/tech/feature/1999/11/18/red_hat/index.html Salon Magazine @@ -1960,7 +1960,7 @@ - Bob Frankenberg's breaking Windows + Bob Frankenberg's Breaking Windows http://cbs.marketwatch.com/archive/19991108/news/current/soapbox.htx?source=blq/yhoo&dist=yhoo CBS MarketWatch @@ -1993,7 +1993,7 @@ - LinuxWorld report on FreeBSDCon 99 + LinuxWorld Report on FreeBSDCon 99 http://www.linuxworld.com/linuxworld/lw-1999-10/lw-10-bsd_p.html LinuxWorld @@ -2006,8 +2006,8 @@ - FreeBSDCon'99: Fans of Linux's lesser-known sibling gather for - the first time + FreeBSDCon'99: Fans of Linux's Lesser-Known Sibling Gather for + the First Time http://cnn.com/TECH/computing/9911/01/freebsd.con99.idg/index.html CNN @@ -2015,7 +2015,7 @@ 01 November 1999 Vicki Brown -

Repost of IDG article about FreeBSDCon '99.

+

Repost of IDG Article about FreeBSDCon '99.

@@ -2049,8 +2049,8 @@
- ENTERA DELIVERS FreeBSD STREAMING SERVER SUPPORTING - QUICKTIME + Entera Delivers FreeBSD Streaming Server Supporting + Quicktime http://www.entera.com/news/pressreleases/1004elsabsd.html Entera @@ -2123,7 +2123,7 @@ August - Out of Linux limelight, devil gets its due + Out of Linux Limelight, Devil Gets Its Due http://web.boston.com/technology/packages/opensource/linux_limelight.shtml Boston Globe @@ -2136,7 +2136,7 @@ - Reporter's notebook: Hackers on holiday + Reporter's Notebook: Hackers on Holiday http://www.cnn.com/TECH/computing/9908/11/hacker.hols.idg/index.html CNN @@ -2184,7 +2184,7 @@ Duke Computer Scientists Exceed "Gigabit" Data - Processing Speeds With Internet Software + Processing Speeds with Internet Software http://www.sciencedaily.com/releases/1999/08/990802072727.htm Science Daily Magazine @@ -2205,7 +2205,7 @@ July - WORLDS LARGEST INDEPENDENT IPP HITS NEW MILESTONE + Worlds Largest Independent IPP Hits New Milestone http://www.pair.com/pair/press/19990727.html Pair Networks @@ -2222,7 +2222,7 @@ - Free OS? It' s as easy as BSD + Free OS? It's as Easy as BSD http://www.techwebuk.com/story/TUK19990726S0029 TechWeb UK @@ -2236,7 +2236,7 @@ - BSD a better OS than Linux? + BSD a Better OS than Linux? http://www.zdnet.com/zdnn/stories/news/0,4586,2299366,00.html ZD Net News @@ -2249,7 +2249,7 @@ - The Net's stealth operating system + The Net's Stealth Operating System http://www.msnbc.com/news/292376.asp MSNBC @@ -2262,7 +2262,7 @@ - Embed Together: The Case For BSD In Network Appliances + Embed Together: the Case for BSD in Network Appliances http://www.performancecomputing.com/features/9906of2.shtml Performance Computing @@ -2279,7 +2279,7 @@ June - Radio interview: Linux and FreeBSD + Radio Interview: Linux and FreeBSD http://ebs.tamu.edu/kamu-fm/gig-24jun99.ram GigABytes Radio Talk Show http://cis.tamu.edu/news/gigabytes/index.html @@ -2323,7 +2323,7 @@ - GPL and BSD: explication and comparison + GPL and BSD: Explication and Comparison http://www.32bitsonline.com/article.php3?file=issues/199906/gplbsd&page=1 32BitsOnline @@ -2361,7 +2361,7 @@ - Yes! There is intelligent life beyond Linux + Yes! There Is Intelligent Life beyond Linux http://www.networkweek.com/openwindow/story/NWW19990611S0005 Network Week Online @@ -2378,7 +2378,7 @@ May - Silicon Carny: Why I run FreeBSD + Silicon Carny: Why I Run FreeBSD http://www.sunworld.com/sunworldonline/swol-05-1999/swol-05-silicon.html SunWorld @@ -2390,8 +2390,8 @@ - INTERNET'S BUSIEST SOFTWARE ARCHIVE REACHES NEW DOWNLOAD - MILESTONE + Internet's Busiest Software Archive Reaches New Download + Milestone http://www.wccdrom.com/press/wcarchive_milestone.phtml Walnut Creek CDROM @@ -2419,7 +2419,7 @@ - Gnome is no Windows dwarf + Gnome Is no Windows Dwarf http://news.bbc.co.uk/hi/english/sci/tech/newsid_321000/321433.stm BBC @@ -2445,8 +2445,8 @@ - Micron Electronics NetFRAME chosen for Internet's busiest - site + Micron Electronics NetFRAME Chosen for Internet's Busiest + Site http://www.wccdrom.com/press/micron.phtml Walnut Creek CDROM @@ -2461,7 +2461,7 @@ - The other open-source OS: FreeBSD + The Other Open Source OS: FreeBSD http://www.zdnet.com/pcweek/stories/news/0,4153,400844,00.html ZD Net @@ -2557,7 +2557,7 @@ - FreeBSD wants a place in the sun + FreeBSD Wants a Place in the Sun http://www.upside.com/texis/mvm/down_the_toilet?id=3714d4820 Upside @@ -2565,7 +2565,7 @@ 13 April 1999 Sam Williams -

Introduces FreeBSD to Linux users.

+

Introduces FreeBSD to Linux Users.

@@ -2584,7 +2584,7 @@ - Serious FTP: Behind the scenes of Walnut Creek CDROM + Serious FTP: Behind the Scenes of Walnut Creek CDROM http://cnn.com/TECH/computing/9904/08/cdrom.idg/index.html CNN @@ -2634,7 +2634,7 @@ - Rising support for BSD + Rising Support for BSD http://www.it.fairfax.com.au/990316/openline1.html Fairfax IT News @@ -2666,7 +2666,7 @@ February - LWN interviews Alan Cox + LWN Interviews Alan Cox http://lwn.net/1999/features/ACInterview/ Linux Weekly News @@ -2719,8 +2719,8 @@ - The return of BSD - What are the BSD flavors and why might you - use them? + The Return of BSD - What Are the BSD Flavors and Why might You + Use Them? http://www.sunworld.com/swol-01-1999/swol-01-bsd.html SunWorld @@ -2748,7 +2748,7 @@ - Nature Web Matters: Internet tomography + Nature Web Matters: Internet Tomography http://helix.nature.com/webmatters/tomog/tomog.html Nature @@ -2771,7 +2771,7 @@ December - The story on FreeBSD + The Story on FreeBSD http://www.linuxworld.com/linuxworld/lw-1998-12/lw-12-freebsd.html LinuxWorld @@ -2816,7 +2816,7 @@ - Ellison plans hardware, bashes Bill + Ellison Plans Hardware, Bashes Bill http://www.news.com/News/Item/0,4,28816,00.html CNET News.com @@ -2834,7 +2834,7 @@ October - Linux/etc, The other free Unixes, part 2 of 2 + Linux/etc, The Other Free Unixes, Part 2 of 2 http://www.computerbits.com/archive/19981000/lnx9810.htm Computer Bits @@ -2860,7 +2860,7 @@ - Unix back in the fight with NT + Unix Back in the Fight with NT http://www.mercurycenter.com/business/center/unix102798.htm Mercury Center @@ -2886,7 +2886,7 @@ - Open Code Frees Up The Net + Open Code Frees Up the Net http://www.zdnet.com/intweek/stories/prtarchivestory/0,4356,361668,00.HTML Inter@ctive Week @@ -2899,7 +2899,7 @@ - It's only free Unix - but I like it + It's only Free Unix - but I Like It http://www.ireland.com/newspaper/computimes/1998/1012/cmp2.htm The Irish Times @@ -2913,7 +2913,7 @@ September - Linux/etc, The other free Unixes, part 1 of 2 + Linux/etc, The other Free Unixes, Part 1 of 2 http://www.computerbits.com/archive/19980900/lnx9809.htm Computer Bits @@ -2921,7 +2921,7 @@ September 1998 Terry Griffin -

Briefly reviews the BSD Unix heritage.

+

Briefly Reviews the BSD Unix Heritage.

@@ -2958,7 +2958,7 @@ August - Hack raises flags about small ISPs + Hack Raises Flags about Small ISPs http://www.news.com/News/Item/0,4,25526,00.html News.com: Tech News First @@ -2987,7 +2987,7 @@ - Pulling on one end of the rope + Pulling on One End of the Rope ( freshmeat ) @@ -3005,7 +3005,7 @@ June - Nader urges Windows probe + Nader Urges Windows Probe http://www.news.com/News/Item/0,4,23145,00.html CNET News.com @@ -3045,7 +3045,7 @@ - Is NT paranoid or is Unix out to get it? + Is NT Paranoid or is Unix out to Get It? http://www.ncworldmag.com/ncworld/ncw-05-1998/ncw-05-nextten.html NC World @@ -3079,7 +3079,7 @@ April - The new Unix alters NT's orbit + The New Unix Alters NT's Orbit http://www.ncworldmag.com/ncworld/ncw-04-1998/ncw-04-nextten.html NC World @@ -3106,7 +3106,7 @@ March - Searching for the next Windows NT + Searching for the Next Windows NT http://www.ncworldmag.com/ncworld/ncw-03-1998/ncw-03-nextten.html NC World http://www.ncworldmag.com/ @@ -3128,7 +3128,7 @@ - Five alternative operating systems reviewed + Five Alternative Operating Systems Reviewed http://www.cnet.com/Content/Reviews/Compare/AltOS/ CNET @@ -3142,7 +3142,7 @@ February - Source code for the masses + Source Code for the Masses http://www.news.com/SpecialFeatures/0,5,18652,00.html News.com --- press.xml.diff ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: From: Colin Percival To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: www/58029: [patch] news/press: correct capitalization of headlines Date: Tue, 14 Oct 2003 22:36:47 +0100 I think you'll also find, in the Chicago Manual of Style, the following rule: "When quoting another author, or referencing a work, keep the existing punctuation and capitalization unless it is gratuitously wrong (in which case [sic] should be added)." Since these are all links to external articles, they should be left unchanged. Colin Percival From: Josef El-Rayes To: Colin Percival Cc: freebsd-www@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: www/58029: [patch] news/press: correct capitalization of headlines Date: Wed, 15 Oct 2003 00:08:28 +0200 Colin Percival wrote: > I think you'll also find, in the Chicago Manual of Style, the following > rule: "When quoting another author, or referencing a work, keep the > existing punctuation and capitalization unless it is gratuitously wrong (in > which case [sic] should be added)." > Since these are all links to external articles, they should be left > unchanged. this is why i asked in an above mail, whether i should keep it the way it was in the original document or fix it to apply these rules. ceri, did i misunderstand your email? -josef -- www: http://www.daemon.li nic-hdl: JER1080312-NICAT BSD in AT: www.bsdcode.at "Make World - Not War!" From: Colin Percival To: freebsd-www@FreeBSD.org Cc: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: www/58029: [patch] news/press: correct capitalization of headlines Date: Tue, 14 Oct 2003 23:21:22 +0100 At 00:08 15/10/2003 +0200, Josef El-Rayes wrote: >this is why i asked in an above mail, whether i should keep it the way >it was in the original document or fix it to apply these rules. I didn't see the earlier email -- I was just looking at the PR. Wow. That's wierd. Ok, I retract my earlier remark... but I still think that changing the capitalization of someone else's title is *wrong*. Colin Percival PS. My mail server doesn't like "j.el-rayes@daemon.li"; but I assume you're reading www@ anyway. State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: josef State-Changed-When: Thu Jan 15 14:40:43 PST 2004 State-Changed-Why: I, the originator, state that this one can be closed. http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=58029 >Unformatted: