From paulh@logicsquad.net Sun Feb 13 04:17:10 2005 Return-Path: Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 07CF316A4CF for ; Sun, 13 Feb 2005 04:17:10 +0000 (GMT) Received: from grover.logicsquad.net (ppp140-249.lns1.adl2.internode.on.net [150.101.140.249]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with SMTP id 7074643D39 for ; Sun, 13 Feb 2005 04:17:08 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from paulh@logicsquad.net) Received: (qmail 11940 invoked by uid 1000); 13 Feb 2005 04:17:06 -0000 Message-Id: <20050213041706.11939.qmail@grover.logicsquad.net> Date: 13 Feb 2005 04:17:06 -0000 From: Paul A.Hoadley Reply-To: Paul A.Hoadley To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Cc: Subject: Typos in gmirror(8) manual page X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 X-GNATS-Notify: >Number: 77437 >Category: docs >Synopsis: Typos in gmirror(8) manual page >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: trhodes >State: closed >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sun Feb 13 04:20:23 GMT 2005 >Closed-Date: Sat Feb 26 05:17:49 GMT 2005 >Last-Modified: Sat Feb 26 05:17:49 GMT 2005 >Originator: Paul A. Hoadley >Release: FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE i386 >Organization: Logic Squad >Environment: System: FreeBSD grover.logicsquad.net 4.8-STABLE FreeBSD 4.8-STABLE #0: Mon May 12 16:58:58 CST 2003 paulh@grover.logicsquad.net:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GROVER i386 >Description: Almost trivial typos in gmirror.8. >How-To-Repeat: man gmirror >Fix: Diff to gmirror.8 v1.11 attached. The first two are perhaps a little subjective. (In fact, the first is not even an error. It just sounds awkward. The second is similarly strictly correct, but sounds better with a definite article.) The third should be changed to "List all currently configured devices;" or "List every currently configured device;". I chose the latter. --- diff begins here --- --- gmirror.8.orig Sun Feb 13 14:26:31 2005 +++ gmirror.8 Sun Feb 13 14:35:32 2005 @@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ .Sh DESCRIPTION The .Nm -utility is used for mirrors (RAID1) configuration. +utility is used for mirror (RAID1) configuration. After a mirror's creation, all components are detected and configured automatically. All operations like failure detection, stale component detection, rebuild @@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ Create a mirror. The order of components is important, because a component's priority is based on its position (starting from 0). -The component with the biggest priority is used by prefer balance algorithm +The component with the biggest priority is used by the prefer balance algorithm and is also used as a master component when resynchronization is needed, e.g.\& after a power failure when the device was open for writing. .Pp @@ -203,7 +203,7 @@ Stop the given mirror even if it is opened. .El .It Cm list -List every currently configured devices; if a list of devices is passed as a +List every currently configured device; if a list of devices is passed as a parameter then only those devices will be shown. .It Cm load Load --- diff ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: State-Changed-From-To: open->patched State-Changed-By: trhodes State-Changed-When: Thu Feb 24 01:01:10 GMT 2005 State-Changed-Why: Committed, with a minor change. Thanks for the submission. Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->trhodes Responsible-Changed-By: trhodes Responsible-Changed-When: Thu Feb 24 01:01:10 GMT 2005 Responsible-Changed-Why: Over to me, MFC reminder. http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=77437 State-Changed-From-To: patched->closed State-Changed-By: trhodes State-Changed-When: Sat Feb 26 05:17:32 GMT 2005 State-Changed-Why: MFC complete, close this PR. http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=77437 >Unformatted: