From marc@blackend.org Sat May 18 04:35:06 2002 Return-Path: Received: from abigail.blackend.org (blackend.org [212.11.50.35]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 81F3E37B406 for ; Sat, 18 May 2002 04:35:04 -0700 (PDT) Received: from abigail.blackend.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by abigail.blackend.org (8.12.3/8.12.3/ - 15/04/02) with ESMTP id g4IBW0Oc000492 for ; Sat, 18 May 2002 13:32:00 +0200 (CEST) (envelope-from marc@abigail.blackend.org) Received: (from marc@localhost) by abigail.blackend.org (8.12.3/8.12.3/Submit) id g4IBW0Qn000491; Sat, 18 May 2002 13:32:00 +0200 (CEST) Message-Id: <200205181132.g4IBW0Qn000491@abigail.blackend.org> Date: Sat, 18 May 2002 13:32:00 +0200 (CEST) From: Marc Fonvieille Reply-To: Marc Fonvieille To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Cc: Subject: In section 2.9.11 of the Handbook "X-server" should be "X server" X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 X-GNATS-Notify: >Number: 38240 >Category: docs >Synopsis: In section 2.9.11 of the Handbook "X-server" should be "X server" >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: closed >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sat May 18 04:40:01 PDT 2002 >Closed-Date: Sun Jun 23 14:22:24 PDT 2002 >Last-Modified: Sun Jun 23 14:22:24 PDT 2002 >Originator: Marc Fonvieille >Release: FreeBSD 4.6-PRERELEASE i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD abigail.blackend.org 4.6-PRERELEASE FreeBSD 4.6-PRERELEASE #5: Sun May 12 00:30:43 CEST 2002 marc@abigail.blackend.org:/usr/src/sys/compile/ABIGAIL i386 >Description: In section 2.9.11 of the Handbook we can find many "X-server" or "X server", only this latter should be used. Read the patch below for more details. >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: Apply the patch to handbook/install/chapter.sgml --- chapter.sgml.diff begins here --- --- chapter.sgml.org Sat May 18 13:23:42 2002 +++ chapter.sgml Sat May 18 13:26:44 2002 @@ -3668,7 +3668,7 @@ - Configure X-Server + Configure The X Server In order to use a graphical user interface such as KDE, GNOME, @@ -3830,7 +3830,7 @@ Do not exceed the ratings of your monitor. Damage could occur. If you have doubts select ABORT and get the information. The remainder of the installation process - will be unaffected and configuring the X-Server can be done + will be unaffected and configuring the X server can be done later using /stand/sysinstall. When finished, move on to the next item. @@ -3892,7 +3892,7 @@ After selecting Okay, some messages will briefly appear advising to wait and attempting to start - the X-server. This process takes a few moments, so be + the X server. This process takes a few moments, so be patient. The screen will go blank for a short period of time and @@ -3900,7 +3900,7 @@ Congratulations, you've got a running server! If nothing appears or the display is distorted, - kill the X-server using + kill the X server using Ctrl Alt --- chapter.sgml.diff ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: From: Giorgos Keramidas To: Marc Fonvieille Cc: bug-followup@FreeBSD.ORG Subject: Re: docs/38240: In section 2.9.11 of the Handbook "X-server" should be "X server" Date: Sat, 18 May 2002 16:01:39 +0300 On 2002-05-18 13:32, Marc Fonvieille wrote: > In section 2.9.11 of the Handbook we can find many "X-server" or "X > server", only this latter should be used. Read the patch below for > more details. Hello Marc, Well spotted. You are right that one of the two (and not both) should be used. I'm more in favor of X server or X-server, since "X server" can be wrapper in many funny ways as shown below: After you install the X server, ... What do you think? - Giorgos From: Marc Fonvieille To: Giorgos Keramidas Cc: bug-followup@FreeBSD.ORG Subject: Re: docs/38240: In section 2.9.11 of the Handbook "X-server" should be "X server" Date: Sat, 18 May 2002 15:17:07 +0200 On Sat, May 18, 2002 at 04:01:39PM +0300, Giorgos Keramidas wrote: > Hello Marc, Hi Giorgos ;) > > Well spotted. You are right that one of the two (and not both) should > be used. I'm more in favor of X server or X-server, since "X > server" can be wrapper in many funny ways as shown below: > > After you install the X > server, ... > > What do you think? On www.xfree86.org, they use XFree86 X server (http://www.xfree86.org/4.2.0/DESIGN.html for example). So X server seems to be the best solution. And maybe Configure X-Server should be Configure XFree86 X Server; and in the text X server should be used. cheers, Marc State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: blackend State-Changed-When: Sun Jun 23 14:21:20 PDT 2002 State-Changed-Why: Fixed by new version of section 2.9.11 http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=38240 >Unformatted: